Paul Sherbet

By:  Avery, 4th grade 

Chapter 1

The strange castaway

Down in the deep dark forest where gorillas swung from every vine, there was a family there had been a big ship ambush. Pirates came from everywhere the crew had made all the passengers get off and Paul and his family had fell and somehow made it to this island. Well anyway Paul was just a little baby at two and was barely frightened. The papa was out looking for food so Paul was staying with his mother then suddenly they heard some rustling in the bushes  out came a claw then a head then the rest of the body suddenly Paul jumped up.

Chapter 2

Death of Paul’s mother

“Kitty!” he said and ran at the jaguar. The jaguar jumped out of the way just in time to avoid being squished by a 300 pound baby and went to the mama Paul fell into the bushes. When he got up his mother was gone.

 “Titty, Titty where are you “said Paul he looked through the corner of his eye and saw the jaguar he ran to it the jaguar ran. Fast. Paul chased calling

“Titty, titty” yelled Paul he ran after it and fell, but he was 300 pounds he didn’t just fall he bounced. Boing, boing he was gaining on the jaguar then suddenly the daddy came out of nowhere with a sledge hammer but that didn’t really save the day. Paul  had already landed on the jaguar.

“Paauulll” said the dad “you ruined my dramatic moment young man go to your room.”

“but dad” said Paul “I don’t  even have a room.”

“oh yea well….. dang I’m stuck “ said the father but behind him was a bear

 “roaaarrrr…ack I’m chocking on a chip so paul preformed CPR  and the bear got up.             

“Thanks.”

“Anytime”

Paul and his dad walked away

“Well that was just plain freaky” said Paul’s dad.

“Tell me about it” said Paul

“Excuse me” 

“Bubbles.”

THE END